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Critique by CaryM CaryM/critique/231396609">Apr 24, 2010, 11:44:07 AM
oh i really love the bokeh! the pattern of it...erm i am not quite sure if you call it pattern when we talk about bokehs, but i dont know a better word, so whatever...and the colors are both very beautiful. it is awesome how it changes from very warm colors at the bottom to very cold colors at the top. nice.
i also like the blades, i think it would even look better if there were more of them, though, but i am not sure about that. i like how the sun makes them shine on some parts, very lovely.
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Critique by organicarmor organicarmor/critique/231416541">Apr 24, 2010, 12:40:38 PM
Love all the contrasts in this: abstraction and realism, soft edge and hard edge, delicate and massive, dark and light. The painterly quality of the light is lovely (little droplets of it, like dew). The low, off-center sun gives it a feeling of wide open space. The colors are rich - there is a lot of tonality within a small range of hues.
The only thing I'd change is the regularity of the stamping/erasing tool at the top. If you vary the shape and size of the tool and the spacing of the marks, it will make it more smoke/cloud-like. Otherwise, beautiful work.
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jaxvirtous92 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
superb!
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:iconal-baum:
Al-Baum Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
Thank you :aww:
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:iconherrschaetzer:
herrschaetzer Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You have been featured in my journal :D
See the whole entry here: [link]

I really like your style :thumbsup:
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:iconazkal:
azkal Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2011
rely so good
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:iconlothrian:
Lothrian Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Love the colours in this - such a simple pallette, yet so beautiful :)
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:iconh3llana-mod:
H3llana-mod Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Student General Artist
magique
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:iconsea-of-llights:
Sea-Of-lLights Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011
Das ist fantastisch! Die ganze Serie ist wunderschön! Kräftig und wahrhaftig.
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:iconmishelangello:
Mishelangello Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2010
very beautiful!
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:icons-t-r-a-n-g-e:
S-t-r-a-n-g-e Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2010
fantastic feeling of the summer !
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:iconal-baum:
Al-Baum Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2010
:sun:
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:iconxxxbwitch:
xxxbWitch Featured By Owner May 19, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
firey (feiry? fiery? Meh.)
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:iconfuzzyxpanda:
FuzzyxPanda Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
The colors are really pretty. Such a lovely blue and gold. :D I even like the black.
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:iconal-baum:
Al-Baum Featured By Owner May 4, 2010
:aww:
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:iconnanah66:
Nanah66 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
A great work! Wonderful colors and lights.
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:iconal-baum:
Al-Baum Featured By Owner May 1, 2010
Thanks !
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:iconmakks87:
makks87 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2010
AMAZING use of color!
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:iconal-baum:
Al-Baum Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2010
:aww: thank you
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:iconjelefi:
jelefi Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2010
you've been featured here: [link]
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:iconal-baum:
Al-Baum Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2010
Thanks a lot :hug:
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:iconratabago:
Ratabago Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010
This work has been featured in my latest journal. :clap:
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:iconal-baum:
Al-Baum Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2010
Thanks a lot :hug:
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:iconratabago:
Ratabago Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2010
Pleasure. :)
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:iconchinastone:
Chinastone Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010
Very strong work.
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:iconal-baum:
Al-Baum Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2010
Thank you :)
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:iconkaibeaux:
kaibeaux Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2010  Professional Photographer
It's stunning. The colors, the bokeh, everything..
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:iconal-baum:
Al-Baum Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010
Thank you :)
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:iconlucidgypsy:
LucidGypsy Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Congratulations, you've been chosen as the "Weekly Member Feature" at #naturephotographer group!
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:iconal-baum:
Al-Baum Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2010
Hey thanks !
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:iconoro-elui:
oro-elui Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
enchanting.
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:iconal-baum:
Al-Baum Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2010
:aww:
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:iconkristall-photos:
Kristall-Photos Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Love it *-*
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:iconal-baum:
Al-Baum Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2010
Thanks :hug:
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:iconebenewood:
EBENEWOOD Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010   General Artist
Vibrations of a dream.....slowly moved by the wind whisper....facing a gorgeous color gradation....wishing the sun coming back...Your dream is about to come true Alain.....:cuddle::sun:
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:iconal-baum:
Al-Baum Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2010
:eager:

Soleil aujourd'hui, ça faisait si longtemps !
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:iconebenewood:
EBENEWOOD Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2010   General Artist
Ha!Ha!Ha! Cet emoticon est marrant!
Tu vas enfin pouvoir gambader à nouveau en quête de nouvelles poésies......Take care sweety....:cuddle:
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BlackKnightsGraphix Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
WOW that's interesting!
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:iconal-baum:
Al-Baum Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2010
:aww:
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:iconmattsma:
Mattsma Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2009  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Your gallery is fantastic!
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:iconelogan-photography:
ELogan-Photography Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2009
this has been featured here [link]
:D!
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:iconshep-herd:
Shep-herd Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2009
Wow! Simply wonderful!
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CheeseCheese16 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2009   Photographer
this is amazing, i love the colours and the feeling of autumn. the oranges and blues are quite simple, but i think this adds to the photograph as a whole. very very nice
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:iconal-baum:
Al-Baum Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2009
Thanks a lot for your comment. :)
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:iconsilvermoon76:
silvermoon76 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2009
Wow! I'm loving all your work! This one is particularly amazing.
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:iconal-baum:
Al-Baum Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2009
:aww: thanks !
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:icongetcarter:
getcarter Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009   Photographer
wonderfull shot, the composition is exellent - an so is the ligth!
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:iconnotoca:
notoca Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2009
I've featured you here >> [link] :heart:
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:iconal-baum:
Al-Baum Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2009
Thank you ! :D
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WildWinyan Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2009   Photographer
This lovely work has been featured in my journal! [link] :iconspotlightplz:
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:iconal-baum:
Al-Baum Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009
Thanks a lot ! :hug:
And so sorry for the late reply...
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Lunawhite7 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2009
Beautiful picture!!
<3
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Jul 4, 2009, 7:58:27 PM
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