Love all the contrasts in this: abstraction and realism, soft edge and hard edge, delicate and massive, dark and light. The painterly quality of the light is lovely (little droplets of it, like dew). The low, off-center sun gives it a feeling of wide open space. The colors are rich - there is a lot of tonality within a small range of hues. The only thing I'd change is the regularity of the stamping/erasing tool at the top. If you vary the shape and size of the tool and the spacing of the marks, it will make it more smoke/cloud-like. Otherwise, beautiful work.
oh i really love the bokeh! the pattern of it...erm i am not quite sure if you call it pattern when we talk about bokehs, but i dont know a better word, so whatever...and the colors are both very beautiful. it is awesome how it changes from very warm colors at the bottom to very cold colors at the top. nice. i also like the blades, i think it would even look better if there were more of them, though, but i am not sure about that. i like how the sun makes them shine on some parts, very lovely.
The only thing I'd change is the regularity of the stamping/erasing tool at the top. If you vary the shape and size of the tool and the spacing of the marks, it will make it more smoke/cloud-like. Otherwise, beautiful work.
i also like the blades, i think it would even look better if there were more of them, though, but i am not sure about that. i like how the sun makes them shine on some parts, very lovely.
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